Bad Call

Bad Call

Posted by Brian • May 17, 2017

Original Release Date: October 9, 2012

There's an artistic choice in panel one that was intended to be a shortcut, but actually turned out really nicely. The dust cloud in the back with arms and legs and swords sticking out of it was done so I wouldn't have to draw individual people, but I think it also adds comic relief. Remember, this is ultimately a story that's not really intended to be taken seriously, so while it was originally done to save time and because I lacked confidence in my work, I feel as though it added to the visual/comedic appeal of the page.

I am also really proud of the exchange between Stu and Renee. I like how Stu has to duck mid-conversation, and how the sound effect splits his dialogue. It does a good job of letting the reader know that the action is not going to stop to afford Stu time to talk strategy with Renee. Not only does it seem more real, it's also funnier.